Breagha, Clyde and I wrote stories. Breagha wrote a story about a murder mystery, Clyde wrote a story about a man in the future and he gets stuck in the Polar Rift and this is the beginning of my story. I think all the stories are really good!

It is coming! Under my cold feet, I could hear the ice cracking; see a dark line running towards me. I was scrambling backwards over the polar ice. I didn’t want to end up like him. I could still see the trail of blood and the body disappearing into the ice.

These are some of the targets that I have met: Using wow words, setting the scene and setting the atmosphere.